This is really nice-- I love the very delicate quality of your line work, and her expression is fabulous. Her upper arm looks like it's curving a bit much, but I really like her fett, and how much volume they have. Good stuff!
I agree that her arm does look a bit wonky. I was having problems with my tablet (... when don't I?) with it being overly sensitive and dragging the lines everywhere, so I think I rushed it. If my program weren't expired, I'd fix it. >:
Do you really think the linework is delicate? That's amusing, because the program I used (sai) is just about as anti-delicate as you can get. It might be, though, that how I lightened the lineart that made it look..softer, I guess.
Thank you for the comment on her expression. I tried to convey someone who is very tired, but is so doped up on energy drinks and whatnot, that they can't be bothered.
and, um. :> I love her feet.
PHWEE~
First comment I've gotten from someone who doesn't watch me that wasn't some crappy "cool!" . Thanks! :>
No problem! I crave constructive criticism, so I try to leave reviews that are a little more than two words long.
I think the "delicate" feel from the piece comes from the build up of tiny lines to get the thicker outlines and the like (and the work in the bangs). And that sucks about an expired program. What do you work in now?
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Her upper arm looks like it's curving a bit much, but I really like her fett, and how much volume they have. Good stuff!
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Avery
Do you really think the linework is delicate? That's amusing, because the program I used (sai) is just about as anti-delicate as you can get. It might be, though, that how I lightened the lineart that made it look..softer, I guess.
Thank you for the comment on her expression. I tried to convey someone who is very tired, but is so doped up on energy drinks and whatnot, that they can't be bothered.
and, um. :> I love her feet.
PHWEE~
First comment I've gotten from someone who doesn't watch me that wasn't some crappy "cool!" . Thanks! :>
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I've never seen that energy around my area, looks good.
I like the folds on the shirt, and the details on the hair. Nice work
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I think the "delicate" feel from the piece comes from the build up of tiny lines to get the thicker outlines and the like (and the work in the bangs). And that sucks about an expired program. What do you work in now?
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Avery
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